TERMINATION
You
deserted me in my hour of need
I
cried hard for your cold deed
I
just fail to comprehend
Happiness
is now found in strands
Wherever
I look I am in dismay
But
I do believe there’s got to be a way
There’s
no point in whining now
Pillar
of trust has stooped so low
Now
I don’t need any consolation
Thanks
for this much needed termination
(1)
Now
I am out of the vicious circle of lies
U’ve
broken me so hard that my soul cries
If
this was your intention you should have made it clear
Could
have stopped myself from being fooled by ur tears
Why
did I trust you? U’ve made me so weak
That
now I feel like my life is a living freak
There’s
no point in whining now
Pillar
of trust has stooped so low
Now
I don’t need any consolation
Thanks
for this much needed termination
(2)
I
was such a fool to be entangled in your laugh
I
was taken aback when so easily you called it off
What
was my fault? Please answer me
It
may be a joke for you but its life for me
U
have become my habit I can’t forget you
Wish
you could have realized that my love was true
There’s
no point in whining now
Pillar
of trust has stooped so low
Now
I don’t need any consolation
Thanks
for this much needed termination
Termination by Vishesh Kumar is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License
Hello!
ReplyDeleteWaited anxiously for your song I liked it but as a self proclaimed literary critic like to rate it b/w 5.5-6/10.
Really like 1st stanza though and the repetition of the four lines.
And in the end who am I. Write my friend what your heart says.
I also write poems but for myself only.U are more extrovert and I find it quiet amazing that despite being a science student we never think that much for it.Maybe that's our inner soul or maybe our destiny.Don't get me wrong Destiny here implies The Destination and not the luck.
I would end with these lines by Alexander Pope
"Play Your Part Well There All The Honor Lies.
Now I am fedup of typing in mobile so till then
Sayonara!
Thanks Saurabh. Never got to know ur literary side but I think that you have a potential to write good n thanks for giving me feedback on this one.
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