WHO AM I?
Whenever I make some mistake
I start feeling low
Even if people say nice things to me
I did wrong I know
          Why
does it hurt whenever I do something wrong
          The
pain of guilt grows strong and strong
          Having
everybody by my side yet I feel alone
          I ask
so many questions to heart of my own
Who am I as a person?
Need to discover real myself
Broken down by feeling of guilt
Have to improve myself
1)  
I do like to
help others
Share their joys
and sorrows
Whenever I
falter as a person
Its like I am
killing innocent sparrows
      There are so many situations
      Where my heart undergoes fluctuations
       Its very easy to break and mend a toy
      But not so if to a broken heart you bring
a joy
      2)I’ve
faced so many boulders
          Yet I
crossed them with ease
          Whenever
I hurt someone
          There’s
no rest and peace
               I am not perfect yet I wanna improve
               Being a good human that’s all I gotta
prove
               Maybe today I feel down and out, but
               Never gonna let my self conscience lose out    
Who Am I by Vishesh Kumar is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License
 
Nice job
ReplyDeleteI really like the phrase "killing innocent sparrows"
and the rhyme b/w joy and toy.
Thanks for the feedback Saurabh.... This song is more closer to my heart as I wrote it after I hurt my sister, though unintentionally...
ReplyDeleteNice song! My favorite part is 'Having everybody by my side yet I feel alone'.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sujana :)
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