WHO AM I?
Whenever I make some mistake
I start feeling low
Even if people say nice things to me
I did wrong I know
Why
does it hurt whenever I do something wrong
The
pain of guilt grows strong and strong
Having
everybody by my side yet I feel alone
I ask
so many questions to heart of my own
Who am I as a person?
Need to discover real myself
Broken down by feeling of guilt
Have to improve myself
1)
I do like to
help others
Share their joys
and sorrows
Whenever I
falter as a person
Its like I am
killing innocent sparrows
There are so many situations
Where my heart undergoes fluctuations
Its very easy to break and mend a toy
But not so if to a broken heart you bring
a joy
2)I’ve
faced so many boulders
Yet I
crossed them with ease
Whenever
I hurt someone
There’s
no rest and peace
I am not perfect yet I wanna improve
Being a good human that’s all I gotta
prove
Maybe today I feel down and out, but
Never gonna let my self conscience lose out
Who Am I by Vishesh Kumar is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License
Nice job
ReplyDeleteI really like the phrase "killing innocent sparrows"
and the rhyme b/w joy and toy.
Thanks for the feedback Saurabh.... This song is more closer to my heart as I wrote it after I hurt my sister, though unintentionally...
ReplyDeleteNice song! My favorite part is 'Having everybody by my side yet I feel alone'.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sujana :)
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